Open Poetry #44 |
We're Stars |
Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Bones and I are in the Middle School play. He’s a butcher, and I’m a baker. We have our faces covered with theatrical make-up. Riding home on the subway train, we gather quite a lot of fans. They stare at us, and want to sit beside us. It’s surprising how a little face paint can make the ugliness of us appear attractive. Bobby |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
The snow seems like Nature's "face paint" for the various and asundry habiliments of humanity ... good 'write'!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Secondhanddreampoet, I'm happy you liked the poem. Your response puts me in mind of the great snow of 96 I think it was. It buried our beautiful rowhouse neighborhood in 36 inches of snow. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
A lovely kind of booster for your self-confidence. Those plays in schoolyears remain unforgettable. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, Yes it was a good booster. The riders on the subway were more than kind to us. School plays were a load of fun. Love Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Bobby - another great write about Bones, with you included. I'm assuming the play went well... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Bill, Yes, the play went very well. Those were fun times. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Bobby you and Bones aren't taking a shot at some woman you know are you? Bones needed the attention to realize that he too is part of the world's plays. Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, No, Bones and I are not taking any shots at any ladies. We don't do that kind of work. Bones always knew of his role on the worlds stage. He was very much aware of it, and told us all about it. Bobby |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
ah wonderful Bobby... I'm happy both you and Bones got to be stars!! love RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear RDB, Yes, our salient and adorably touching features became apparent to the public at even this very early age. People just couldn't keep their eyes, and hands off us. Thanks for your support along the way. Love Bobby |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
I remember being in a play. "Annie." I got the be roosevelt. Me and my best friend would take turns being pushed down a really long downward slanted hallway as fast as we could in the wheelchair. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, That sounds like great fun. Bobby |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
I really like this one!!!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks WindWalker11, I'm very pleased you enjoyed the poem. Bobby |
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