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Ephemeral Tenderness.
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Ephemeral Tenderness. |
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Goldenrose Member Elite
since 2003-05-30
Posts 3665
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In the morning light, love guides you away from dreamscapes into a place far away from reality into surreal wonder. Smoothing hands shiver skin softly,lips kiss lightly to thrill eyes closed to darkness and plunge, fall freely and emerge at the shoreline of eyes that swim only for you,reflect the stars only for you, lift passions veil only for you and conjoined hearts that beat a shared sound of life, in utopian and fragrant bird sung daydreams, by cool watered streams of evanescent light that is the metaphor of human love, life and being. Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
grand imagery and Romanticism ... lovely read ! I am especially fond of: "...conjoined hearts that beat a shared sound of life(!)" MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !! |
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Alwye
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since 1999-06-16
Posts 3850In the space between moments |
I like "smothing hands shiver skin"--great use of alliteration! Beautifully tender and romantic. Great read! |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Goldenrose - enjoyed reading this writing... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I was labouring over which lines to quote as being my favourites ~ There were several of them! Shdp and Alwye chose already quoted a few of them ~ which helped narrow what I would quote! lol ~ "bird sung daydreams, by cool watered streams of evanescent light"...  Lovely writing, dear Rose of Gold!  Linda |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I loved this, Goldenrose. There's no better experience. |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Lovely writing, Phil. Ida |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
What a tender love write. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
good read  |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
such a cool title for such a neat write...well done....well done...loved how chock full it is of little pictures that you have drawn with your words |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I enjoyed every line especially the one about passions veil...I like all of it! ~ARH |
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