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Goldenrose
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0 posted 2009-04-29 07:16 PM



In the morning light,
love guides you away
from dreamscapes into a
place far away from
reality into surreal wonder.
Smoothing hands shiver skin
softly,lips kiss lightly
to thrill eyes closed
to darkness and plunge,
fall freely and emerge
at the shoreline of
eyes that swim only
for you,reflect the
stars only for you,
lift passions veil only
for you and conjoined
hearts that beat a
shared sound of life,
in utopian and fragrant
bird sung daydreams, by
cool watered streams of
evanescent light that is
the metaphor of human
love, life and being.

Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength,while loving someone deeply gives you courage. Lao Tzu 6th century BC.

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secondhanddreampoet
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1 posted 2009-04-29 07:53 PM


grand imagery and Romanticism ...

lovely read !

I am especially fond of:

"...conjoined
hearts that beat a
shared sound of life(!)"

MUCH (sustained) applause for this 'penning' !!

Alwye
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In the space between moments
2 posted 2009-04-29 08:28 PM


I like "smothing hands shiver skin"--great use of alliteration!

Beautifully tender and romantic.  Great read!

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-04-29 08:48 PM


Goldenrose - enjoyed reading this writing...

BC

Earth Angel
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Realms of Light
4 posted 2009-04-29 10:43 PM


I was labouring over which lines to quote as being my favourites ~ There were several of them!

Shdp and Alwye chose already quoted a few of them ~ which helped narrow what I would quote! lol

~ "bird sung daydreams, by
cool watered streams of
evanescent light"...

Lovely writing, dear Rose of Gold!


Linda


Suncleaver
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5 posted 2009-04-29 10:54 PM


I loved this, Goldenrose.

There's no better experience.

Marchmadness
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6 posted 2009-04-30 12:48 PM


Lovely writing, Phil.
                    Ida

Midnitesun
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Gaia
7 posted 2009-04-30 05:34 PM


What a tender love write.
vandana
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8 posted 2009-04-30 07:35 PM


good read
steavenr
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9 posted 2009-05-01 12:33 PM


such a cool title for such a neat write...well done....well done...loved how chock full it is of little pictures that you have drawn with your words
A Romantic Heart
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Forever In Your Heart
10 posted 2009-06-17 01:54 PM


I enjoyed every line especially the one about passions veil...I like all of it!

~ARH

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