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Open Poetry #44

Panic

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

0 posted 2009-04-29 06:54 PM

Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
New places
Pause.
Hold on...
Where were we?
Ah, that's right.
Eyes meet
Lips touch
Arms embrace
Hands explore
Now familliar places

But wait: what if...?

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

1 posted 2009-04-29 07:00 PM

Now you have me waiting for the "what if". I like the pause and then the follow through. It makes the mind sort of visualize the intensity that must have come within that pause.

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-04-29 09:22 PM

I'm guessing the hands were feeling that new persons shoulder blades, Right?

Cute write, Oh if it gets past 1st base, move it to Mature content so we can enjoy a little voyerism.

OOPs, Did I say that?
Tracey.

pen&paper
Senior Member

since 2006-06-06

Posts 513

3 posted 2010-02-15 11:57 AM

this was,by no means, at all about first base.

...or second really...going a bit past third...

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