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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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were we but a sinful cornucopia perhaps the bounty of your woman's charms and then the hands of my man full as rams horns and still hungry but you said there was more if I would only venture inside your disease and get to know the infection of your love when it was like saliva devouring my tattoos leaving virgin nerves raw ended and alive again cacophonous was the silence in it's lingering between the vertigo of your lipstick application and the rapture of my taste testing validation to see if it really guarded yes word permissions in other words there, you included intentions too but they were the muffled sound words on shoulders that left wet breath sighs as note scatterings musical to the belly when panted as love songs and sacred as the gospel to our heathen hunger _______________ daark (forbidden) [This message has been edited by Dark Stranger (04-29-2009 09:30 AM).] |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Oh! this is excellent work I enjoyed it immensely well penned..  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
thanks annie |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
quote: Simply awesome! Your love songs transcend any traditional parameters ... you create a very unique sound with your words. Love, Margherita |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"sacred as the gospel to our heathen hunger" THIS is the best line I've ever heard. and I don't mean just poetically either. That one? I'd be buying YOUR drinks. *chuckle*  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms mar, thanks special lady _______________ ms serene...oh hell we could just buy each other's drinks, keeping score is for the tourists...thanks babe |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
but they were the muffled sound words on shoulders that left wet breath sighs as note scatterings Absolutely fantastic!! I love the last line, too... beautiful write! *S* |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms suthern..thak you ms |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"the infection of your love cacophonous was the silence in it's lingering the vertigo of your lipstick application yes word permissions sacred as the gospel to our heathen hunger" ...so many excellent lines in a truly remarkable write...these were just a few that I liked |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
steavenr..thanks for the read!! |
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