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Open Poetry #44

Clouds and Augurs

Pilgrimage
Member Elite

since 2001-12-04

Posts 3945
Texas, USA

0 posted 2009-04-28 02:45 PM

Clouds and Augurs

I wish that I could sing you Gypsy lies
and give you hope,
like phony mystics spangle glamor
over common tragedy.

But my Delphic dreams are true.
Songs are forgotten.
Every story ends

and epics bore the gods.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-04-28 04:12 PM

Yo dear Pilgrimage,

This is a fascinating poem for me. My late Mother-in-law was very good with tea leaves, and life lines. She was a wonderful, wise woman, and I miss her.

Love Bobby

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

2 posted 2009-04-28 04:45 PM

You have made your point in such a refined way ... I think the gods will keep an eye on you!

Love,
Margherita

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

3 posted 2009-04-28 05:35 PM

Nan, that is a very sophisticated piece of writing.

May their story end peacefully.

~ and may your future Delphi dreams be portents of good things to come.