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Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

0 posted 2009-04-28 07:28 AM

dawn hemmed playful in her water colors
not the painting kind of illusion
but the colors of well watered nudity
transparent, sans parents, as if god made

and now godless in her archery of love
stuffing my heart skin leathered straw
with spells of piercing pleasured pricking
a logomania of chanting nearly silent sighs

my hands read her eyes when closed like fingers
as if they are blocking the sun to clarify
that she is really looking at the other me of me
and not just the phallic shape of my shadows

nonetheless I am apathetic in my musings
as but the glances of her eyes when dancing
is welcome warmed enough of this sinclusion
pried between our untouchable folded proper

like freckled tattoos on egyption cotton bosoms

_______________

daark (circle of palms)

poddarku
Senior Member

since 2008-01-15

Posts 589
india

1 posted 2009-04-28 08:30 AM

Dark and brooding.
now godless in her archery of love
stuffing my heart skin leathered straw
with spells of piercing pleasured pricking
a logomania of chanting nearly silent sighs

exceptional

clever talks delay friendship!

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

2 posted 2009-04-28 09:05 AM

thanks poddarku

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-28 11:14 AM

as but the glances of her eyes when dancing
is welcome warmed enough of this sinclusion

This captivates from beginning to end... but these lines are ones I love! *S*

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

4 posted 2009-04-28 12:40 PM

ms suthern..thank you babe!!

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

5 posted 2009-04-28 05:02 PM

quote:
my hands read her eyes when closed like fingers
as if they are blocking the sun to clarify
that she is really looking at the other me of me
and not just the phallic shape of my shadows

This is profound, dear D., I love the whole poem and the series!

Intense.

Love,
Margherita

Dark Stranger
Member Patricius

since 2001-03-19

Posts 13631
West Coast

6 posted 2009-04-28 10:03 PM

ms mar, thanks so much lady friend

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