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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2009-05-31 01:58 AM



Location of Paradise

Sometimes life is about letting go and moving on
and some are ready to move on, ready for a change,
and some are not ready, not willing to let go
of hopes and dreams of plans and schemes, even
though nothing will be gained until they move on.

Sometimes life seems to be about letting go and
moving on but is really about testing your beliefs,
the sincerity of your desires and the accumulation
of hope and your actions creating perseverance.

For those that know what they want there are no
thoughts of letting go, no lingering desires to
move on,  because there is really no place left
to go when you know the location of paradise.

JamesLee
31May
2009










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1 posted 2009-05-31 02:03 AM


I can relate to parts of this, being that I can't stop changing one minute and the next I can't help but stay the same.
Heart2Heart
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2 posted 2009-05-31 02:05 PM


True, one tends to stick to the well known for better or worse. And home will be where the heart is :-)
Heart2Heart

Bloodline
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3 posted 2009-05-31 02:46 PM


One man's paradise, eh?
deeply moving and well
penned,

Bloodline

Margherita
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4 posted 2009-05-31 02:49 PM


Certainly you do live in Paradise, in more than one sense, dear James.

This is a wonderful write, I love it when you get introspective.

Love,
Margherita

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