Open Poetry #44 |
A Prayer |
Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
A Prayer A prayer to satisfy my hunger A hunger that started with pain A sonnet, a whisper, a glancing star Just to smell your essence again, If i could hold you for just one moment One moment a fraction of precious time I could live in that moment forever Just to know that you are mine, I am standing on the outside You do not even see me but brush me aside If only you knew of the heartache i feel The emptiness that is deep inside, Beautiful lady of lament My life loving you has been well spent As i hold out my hand and take hold of yours Show me that you love me Please just open the door, My beautiful lady has gone now And the sorrow she left is done What on earth will i do without her My precious darling Mum... Annie. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
This is very touching and beautiful, dear Annie. And I can relate ... Mums, oh Mums! Love, Margherita |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Margherita Mums are always a worry |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
thank you Annie we hope more and the best I really enjoyed Accept my pass love Nourzihane |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
beautiful dear Annie.. just beautiful.. we seem to be on a parallel of loss here.. my mom was so very precious too... to you dear poet RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you Lovely people.. |
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