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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-04-26 11:46 AM







I climbed the Tor at Glastonbury one sunny afternoon in spring,
to gaze across the willowed vale,
and sense the Magic of a King
called Arthur.

Did he exist? I cannot know; this legend, in my fair, green land.
Is Avalon beneath my feet?
Where sleeps the loyal fighting band
of Arthur?

If I, but had a looking glass enchanted by the Wizard's spell,
what would I see, when there I gazed?
Is Albion safe? What would I tell
to Arthur?

Would I relate the bright dreams young boys have about romantic war?
To ride the wind; to save the land;
to battle on the Saxon shore
with Arthur.

But, that is past; yet, legend tells; deep in a cave in Cheshire, fair;
A hundred Knights and Warriors sleep
with horse, and sword, and armour, there
and Arthur.

The day will come, the legend says... when Albion, in her utmost need
awakens this enchanted band
Is saved by the Heroic deeds
of Arthur.

How stands the wind for Avalon? Is it just all romantic whim?
And was there ever Camelot?
Where does truth end, and Myth begin
for Arthur?

The bright-eyed Ladies; Gallant lovers; Chivalry; all just folklore?
I do hope not; but then, these days,
there are no heroes any more
for Arthur.

And yet; whilst there are dragons to be slayed, and bright-eyed Ladies won;
perhaps, of Merlin's Magic,
a faint trace still sleeps in everyone
for Arthur.

I see no trace of Avalon below, across the willowed plain;
but, it is late; it's time to move.
I climb down to the fields again...
But wait!

A glitter in the grass; a Mirror?
No - it's just an old beer can!
Perhaps, the legend touched my soul,
and I might be a wiser man
like Arthur.


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Marchmadness
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1 posted 2009-04-26 11:53 AM


This is such a beautiful poem. I love the King Arthur tales amd have written several poems about them myself. None quite this good though.
                               Ida

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2 posted 2009-04-26 02:20 PM


nicely done!
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3 posted 2009-04-27 10:28 AM


How stands the wind for Avalon? Is it just all romantic whim?
And was there ever Camelot?
Where does truth end, and Myth begin
for Arthur?

I love this, my friend... When I think of climbing the Tor or standing at Tintagel, I think there must have been more than myth... for something left echoes. *S*

A Romantic Heart
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4 posted 2009-04-27 10:42 AM


One of my favorite stories,
Camelot and Arthur ....

You have done it justice with this
poem~

ARH

Earth Angel
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5 posted 2009-04-27 10:50 AM


Dave, this is truly a "magnificent" pience of writing!

It was magical!




Linda

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6 posted 2009-04-27 11:13 AM


you write so well, kind sir...you inspire...thank you for letting those of us who believe, believe on:

Were the wealth of treasures mined
Or tales of yore more well defined
Twould be no less than hearts could love
E'en were the myth sent from above

Our hearts and minds could not portray
A vision remembered of former day
No greater than the ancient table round
Of knights whose strength doth yet abound

Does Arthur live today or rest in peace?
His legend in our hearts will ne'er cease

As long as dreams fly not away
We'll ne'er forget his blessed day

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