Open Poetry #44 |
Forget-Me-Not Blueness. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
She came from the wide ranging lands of the New World; I came from the High Wolds in the heart of the Shire; worlds apart, yet... so alike in our thinking; our thoughts touched, and sparked... and soft grew a sweet fire. Her hair was pale golden... like sun-kissed, corn meadows, that, in the high Wold breezes, shimmer and dance; Her eyes were a perfect, Forget-Me-Not Blueness... those flowers that denote tragic fate... and romance. And, indeed, romance blossomed... or so, it seemed; the whispered words lovers share soft, in the night; the promises made of a shared life together... all love, and all laughter... the sweetest delight. Hand in hand with her, in the bright, distant New World; the High Wolds abandoned; the Shire... memory; but then... She was gone, like Moon-mist on still water, and I think, forever... she is lost to me. Never, perhaps... to gaze into her eyes of Forget-Me-Not Blueness... to drown in their hue; Never, perhaps... hear the sound of her voice... to hear her soft whisper... "Oh yes... l love you." Never perhaps... to touch her face with fingertips... hold her close to me, from the night's bitter chill; a fairy tale shared? Yes perhaps, but it was sweet; it never quite happened... I don't think it will. And, that... perhaps, is why Forget-Me-Nots hold an old Legend of tragic fate... romance to mar; God bless; and keep you all safe from harm, sweet one... tonight, and forever... wherever you are. "Ne m'oubliez pas"... no, I will not forget you... the High Wolds in summer remind me of you; the cornfields, soft pale in the young morning sunlight... and by the wayside; Forget-Me-Nots... blue. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ This is also just a poem of lost love... it's not part of my autobiography! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
You do lost love like no one else. Ida |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
I agree with Ida Nicely done |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I love forget-me-not flowers, and the story they tell, represent, your poem has presented it well.... ~ARH |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
God bless; and keep you all safe from harm, sweet one... tonight, and forever... wherever you are. I'm glad it's not autobiographical... but it certainly is beautiful! *S* |
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