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closer without mirrors |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast 
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I would always enjoy your windows more I guess it is their kind of reflection that is better than your mirrors when you are standing behind the beside myself of me and the sun has to be just right or the light of the nights too for you to be part of their reflection not taken for granted but accidental when I look just the right way trying to find you there looking back and then you are for long moments but never permanently attached like the edges of dreams sometimes and how one can fall into them quickly if they close their eyes and really want to _______________ daark |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Very interesting poem, To look at ones self in the mirror is a very daunting process as you never see yourself as others see you Very well written |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms Annie, thank you much ms |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Dark Stranger - interesting write, and interesting thoughts... BC |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
BC..thanks guy, I appreciate the review |
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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
D, This is why no one should ever have curtains to close out the night. Never know who you might miss touching. You touched me with this poem. It's wonderful. A |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
like the edges of dreams sometimes and how one can fall into them quickly if they close their eyes and really want to _______________ yes, I like to dream Mr Daark... thank you for sharing yours... Happy New Year...  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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amusemi Senior Member
since 2001-12-08
Posts 1262A State of Disarray |
"and the sun has to be just right or the light of the nights too for you to be part of their reflection not taken for granted but accidental when I look just the right way" This reminds me of the glimpses we catch of our younger self, or of the self that we wish we could be all the time. Perhaps it is simply a ghost...the ghost of a Stranger we can see if we look long and hard enough... |
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rhia_5779 Senior Member
since 2006-06-09
Posts 1334California |
I loved this - it captured the way I feel so beautifully. This is beautiful! Rhia |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
My friend, this is a keeper... with sparkles.  |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
ms ali-san, thanks little one...glad you were walking by ______________ ms muse, thank you lady friend for the touch ___________ ms r&b, thanks lady, you smile me _______________ rhia, thank you much...maybe it is a cali thing? _______________ ms sun, thanks fair lady for the soft sides of your smile |
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