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The Anzac Soldier
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The Anzac Soldier |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria 
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The Anzac Soldier I went to see a lovely old lady that lives at the end of the street, I wanted to hear her life’s story, I knew I’d have to be very discreet, She’d recently lost her life’s partner, a man quite courageous & bold, When I asked her to tell me her story, I heard this story unfold. Tho’ she was well in her nineties, her memory was sharp as a tack As she reached back to another era, fond memories came floating back, She went back to her childhood, the wonderful times of her teens, The dances, the concerts, the parties, meeting the man of her dreams. She met Jim at a party when he came up and asked her to dance, In the uniform of a soldier, she immediately thought of romance. Tall &very good looking and said will you have this waltz with me, She smiled as she rose to meet him & answered shyly ‘most certainly’ He really danced like an Angel, she was eagerly swept off of her feet, At the end of some dances later, he said tomorrow I sail with the fleet, Can I take you home this evening for it’s a night I will never forget, Tomorrow we face a long journey, the destination unknown to us yet. He kissed me so sweetly that evening and at last he bade me farewell, My heart was all of a flutter for I’d fell completely under his spell, My darling will you write me a letter while I’m away at the war, It’ll certainly bolster my spirits, something that’s worth fighting for. I know I’ve only just met you & I don’t want you to think I am bold But if you’ll write me a letter, to me it will be more precious than gold, I knew as my heart now fluttered that with this man I could live evermore And I promised to answer his letters, a promise I could not ignore. It was nearly six months later that a note came to me in the mail, I thought he’d really forgotten but that was now only a minor detail, They’d spent much of that time in transit till they arrived at Gallipoli And went straight into a raging battle that turned into a catastrophe. The note finished by saying I love you & if I have the luck to survive I want you to be my sweetheart, my dear for the rest of my life, My tears of joy ran unhindered as I held that letter close to my heart Making a silent vow to my soldier that nothing would keep us apart. He was finally shot in that battle & came close to that demon of death The thought that I’d be waiting gave him strength for another breath When that terrible battle was over &those living, with fame were endowed They’re known to us all as Anzac’s-the Aussies & Kiwi’s are proud. In time we met at the Alter with me proudly becoming his wife, For over sixty years we were happy in a life that was minus of strife, We raised a wonderful family, now could anyone ask for more, Jim was one of the lucky Anzac’s who came home from that terrible war. Lindsay |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo Lindsay, This is a good poem about letters from home. I always loved them. Bobby [This message has been edited by Robert E. Jordan (04-24-2009 11:38 PM).] |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lindsay, What a sweet story. You are the master story teller. I have read a couple things lately about the Anzac soldiers. I want to learn more now. Very nice tribute. Tracey. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Lindsay, good poem mate and one enjoyed, well done. Have a great day and take care. Rick |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
to my good friends Bobby, Tracey and Rick, thanks fellas for your kind response. Have a great day and take care. Lindsay |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Good Read Lindsay! ~ Always placing a smile on my face ~ Especially on a Sunday.  ARCTIC WIND |
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WindWalker Senior Member
since 2001-10-12
Posts 1218 |
This is a good one my friend. |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
good poem Like poems about war and love. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Mihael, Wind Walker and Critical Mass, thank you so much for your kind comments, They are so much appreciated. Lindsay |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Lovely story Lindsay, not all brave men return home and Jim was really lucky man and so was the lady. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
What a wonderful story and tribute... and so very well written! *S* Great work! |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
A beautifully penned love story. One that truly tugged at the heartstrings. Sending a big hug to you, my dear Aussie Man, Linda  |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
My very good friends, Prasad, Ruth and Linda It always gives me a buzz when I see your three names in the responses and I'm really grateful to you all. May the sun shine upon you always. God bless. love Lindsay |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Lindsay - what a most beautiful romantic story. Very touching my friend... BC |
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booky1940! Member
since 2009-04-16
Posts 136Canada |
A lovely job! Good reading - I like it. Keep it up 'Lindsay.' Booky1940. |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Thanks Bill I'm glad you liked it and thanks for your kind response. your views are always appreciated. Take care. Welcome Booky to PIP, it's always good to see another new name come on up on the screen,and thank you for your comments. |
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