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Alison 
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! 
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(To my PiP friends, Midnitesun & - Owl) Home Please forgive me because I don’t know from day to day how I feel about my home. Some may wonder what home is.  I believe we feel home in our hearts. It is a touchstone in our memories; we can smell it, taste it and feel its touch. I believe home is where I can’t wait for the sunrise to kiss the afternoon sky or peek between winter branches of spruce trees.  Home is where I seek the moon at morning’s first chilled breath or when I feel evening meld with afternoon day.  Home is a color that washes the sky with winter dessert colors of sherbet and confection. It’s where cold brings beauty to all who listen with their eyes as fingertips reach.  It is a vow that all trails will lead to adventure and it allows me to be pure female and change my mind daily about a place I sometimes hate to love. Home is a prayer in nature’s sanctuary. It’s peace from within and acceptance that wild beauty has rough edges. - Alison (photographs taken by Alison) |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Nice lines and photos, Alison. I might begin to steer clear of your posts lest you make me want to experience cold winter again  LOL. Seriously, I love your poems. Have a marvelous day! Mark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Alison You are quite ambivalent when it comes to Alaska. Lovely pictures and even lovlier word pictures......Then the melancholy threads it's way through your words. Nicely done Take care dear girl and don't go out without your winter underwear on.......(smile) Eric |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Mark, Thank you so much. I am quite a fan of yours too. It will be nice to learn with you in the workshop. Alison - Oh, Eric - I am actually passionate about Alaska. I love it with my heart and soul and truly would never really want to live elsewhere. However, over two weeks of -49 degree (farenheit) temperatures are making me tired and a bit cranky. Maybe that is the "ambivilance" that you sense. Also, I write my emotions - and my emotions are never stagnant. My mind and feelings flit and see and taste and feel and ... well, I am the "wear it on the sleeve, write it in a poem" type of person. Thank you for your comments and for reading my stuff. Alison |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
Hi Alison, home is indeed all these things, loved the way you presented it all, very very nice indeed. Enjoyed. Take care my friend and be well. Rick |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
WOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOWOW!!!!!!!!! Alison, I KNOW this is going to sound as though I am saying this because of your dedicating it to Kacy and me, but I promise that every word is true! When I saw first "Alison" then "home" I thought (and these were my EXACT words, "Wow! This is me!" I meant: 1) a poem by Alison 2) a subject (the concept of home) I love 3) Alaska as described in poetry, photographs and sometimes prose (in emails and responses to poems) by Alison However, what was my surprise when I saw that it was dedicated to Kacy and MEEEE!!! All that was before I had even read one word of the poem or seen one photograph - and then, when I read the poem and saw the photographs, I was blown away (by cold Alaskan winds and a warm Alaskan poet and photographer)! This is my all-time favourite of all your poems and photographs (and that is saying A LOT) for so many, many reasons, some of which are sheer excellence, beauty, and your deep and sensitive understanding of life and values. Your photographs are worthy of your poem and your poem is worthy of your photograph and they are all worthy of you, all of which is saying A LOT! AND to have THIS PARTICULAR POEM dedicated to MEEE and to share that dedication and love of Alaska with such a wonderful person as Kacy - well, what could possibly beat that ever! "Thank you" sounds so stupid and understated, but I know that you will understand what I mean - after all, that is why you included me in the dedication, so, thank you! Hugs, huggles and huglets Owl |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Ali, you've left me breathless and speechless, and a bit homesick for Alaska. Your photos capture the essence of the beauty of the Interior. Sadly, the Chemo side-effects wouldn't allow me to handle sub-zeros these days, but I remember well how they can take their toll on your psyche after several weeks of relentless bone-chilling, lung-chilling frigid weather. Yet you are so right, it is breathtakingly beautiful and grabs both heart and soul. Your straightforward honesty in how you present nature is always refreshing and heartwarming, the truest poetry of life. Thank you, dearest poet Alison, for sharing these photos and words and for the kindness of your dedication. It's an honor, one that I'll cherish forever, and to share it with Owlie Diana is fantastic. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
simply superb! [grand-fine word and photo. images] I am especially fond of: "Home is a prayer in nature’s sanctuary. It’s peace from within and acceptance that wild beauty has rough edges." very serious and long-sustained applause! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Alison, I've always found that home is where the hat is. I.e., it's all in the mind. Love Bobby |
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Misty Lilacs Senior Member
since 2005-11-15
Posts 1060White Birch Forest |
Home is a prayer in nature’s sanctuary. It’s peace from within and acceptance that wild beauty has rough edges. Alison, your words and pictures are just stunning. You make winter looks so beautiful. ooxx Marti __________________________ |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Alison, Having been raised in the Northwest. I know something about rugged beauty and bad weather (not quite as rugged) After a while the constant rain gets to you but when spring finally comes it's like you've gone to heaven. I see here that you are not only a talented poetess but a fine photograher as well. Hope you see some warmer days. Ida |
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Claira Member
since 2008-05-11
Posts 102British but living in Thailand |
Hey Alison Lovely words and images, made me a little bit homesick and I've only been back in Cambodia for 2 months! Catch up soon Claira xx |
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TinaTrivett Senior Member
since 2006-07-15
Posts 569 |
Alison, Alison, Alison...I have read your poems for quite a long time now, and they only get better. You pick the perfect words for the perfect moments. Also, as an aside, I don't know if I ever mentioned this...but in your photo, you look IDENTICAL to my best friend from High School. The same sweet face. That always brings me a smile when I click on your writes. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Stunning pictures and magical words. I'm simply memorized by your ability to weave words... hehe that sounded poetic eh? Great job! -Zach When I see your smile, and I know it’s not for me, that’s when I’ll miss you. |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Alison - this is so well constructed with the words and graphics. You did well, very well... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
So deeply enjoyable, dear Alison, your work of art unraveling your Home. Pure beauty. Love, Margherita |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Ali Girl ~ Your Alaska is beautiful, your photographs are beautiful, your poetry is beautiful, your sensitive and caring soul is beautiful, and YOU are BEAUTIFUL!!!! Might I also add that what you have so beautifully illustrated here, merits all the wonderful comments your readers/viewers have written! ~ and it is quite apparent that Owl and Midnitesun appreciate this gift!  Love you, l'il darlin'! Linda  |
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Burk28 Member
since 2009-01-08
Posts 80Michigan USA |
wow and excellent layout and wonderful words as well, outstanding sentiment rendered here, thank you for sharing this fine piece of writing. Peace of mind can only be achieved when we find peace with self |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
breathtakingly beautiful... just like you Ali-girl.. home is where your heart lies indeed.. your pics are wonderful as are the beauty of your words...  RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Home is not always where we reside, but where our loved ones do, in that glimmering teardrop, inside our hearts. Home, is: A beautiful poem, with beautiful imagery, by a beautiful poet, for two beautiful people. |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Alison, you presentations and poem here is very beautiful. You are a wonderful poet. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
Rick, Thank you for stopping in and reading and enjoying. It's always a pleasure to know that you have visited one of my poems. Alison - Diana, You make me smile so often. You are one of the most kind women that I have met on line or off line. Thank you for enjoying my poetry and photographs. Also, thank you for the wonderful and caring emails. I promise to settle down and write back soon. I love to write poems and think that you might enjoy them. It gives me pleasure and that is really what I get from writing. It's what feeds me. You are a good woman and friend. Thank you. Alison - Kacy, I think of you often when I am out wandering and taking pictures. I know that Alaska is not the place for you now, but if I can share a piece of it as I see it - this home we both care so much about - then I am happy. You know I think of you often and send positive thoughts for your recovery. Love, Alison - Bruce, Thank you so much, my friend. You know that your words and opinion mean a lot to me. Alison - Bobby, You are right. If one wears a hat that is. Yes, it's in the mind. Love, Alison - Marti, I love seeing you in the group of comments. It's been awhile since I have had the pleasure of reading your poetry. Hope that you are back posting again soon. Alison - Ida, Thank you for reading and commenting. How are you faring in the PNW weather right now? I hope that all is well with you. I value you as a fellow Pipster and a friend. Love, Alison - Claira, How wonderful it is to see you back! Thank you for stopping in and see you in the Workshop. Alison - Tina, Your comments make me feel so good. How wonderful to resemble someone that makes you happy to remember. Thank you also for all the nice things that you write. I really appreciate your observations and that you take the time to read and comment. Alison - Zach, Thank you. It's good to see you and know your thoughts about my poem. Thank you again. Alison - Ah, BC, thank you so much. A - Margherita, It's a pleasure to know that you read my poem. Thank you for all the kindness. Love, Alison - Linda Lousy, Thank you, sweet one. You are so darn good to me. And you are the beautiful one. Yep, you are. Love you, Ali - Burk, Thank you so much for taking the time to read and comment. Your words mean a lot to me. Again, welcome to PiP too. Alison - RDB darling, Thank you. I hope that you are feeling better. Love you, girly girl ... Ali-girl - Rich, You are so kind .. thank you for the warmth of your response. It's good to see you back - I missed you. Alison - Sue, You are quite the poet yourself, lady. Thank you for reading .. and for becoming a friend. Alison |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Looking forward to the email, Alison. Thank you for your wonderfully kind Alison-words and thoughts. PLEASE consider the book I suggested . . . pretty please? Owl |
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r v wooo Senior Member
since 2007-08-07
Posts 656 |
beautiful! |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
I am doing quite well. Alison. I lve in so. Calif. now and it'e like spring here, for the time being. Ida |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Ok, Everybody already said everything I was going to say, except maybe this: Anana! (Anersarpok) Ikpinartok!!!!! WT. |
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Alison
since 2008-01-27
Posts 9318Lumpy oatmeal makes me crazy! |
I am sorry that I did not come back to thank those who responded again to this poem. I just needed to take some time. Okay, I gotta ask ... what does "Anana! (Anersarpok) Ikpinartok!!!!!" mean? A |
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