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Vinyl Ottoman Sr
New Member

since 2009-02-12

Posts 4

0 posted 2009-04-23 03:40 PM

Last time I checked, my dreams were free
Always were — always will be.
So take it all, but I’ll still own
A ticket to the great unknown
Climbing mountains, chasing stars,
Rocket ships and racing cars
Deep sea diving, western wars
Crashing waves and golden shores
Free, oh free. These dreams are free.
No, you can’t take that away from me.

‘Cause it’s my right to close my eyes
Wander to a new surprise
Feel that rush of wonderland
Imagination’s course unplanned
So, take it all. Hey, be my guest.
My mind is still a treasure chest.
Overflowing with no bounds
Sights and smells. Angelic sounds.
Free, oh free. These dreams are free.
No, you can’t take that away from me.

Always were — always will be ....
Last time I checked, my dreams were free.

Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis

since 2008-01-25

Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania

1 posted 2009-04-23 03:55 PM

Yo Vinyl,

This is nice work. Lots of things are free.

Bobby

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

2 posted 2009-04-24 02:56 PM

Interesting handle: V O Sr.

This is quite a pleasant read.
I liked your last line:
Always were — always will be ....
Last time I checked, my dreams were free.

Welcome to PIP
Tracey.

Mysteria

Member Laureate

since 2001-03-07

Posts 18328
British Columbia, Canada

3 posted 2009-04-24 04:16 PM

I just loved this!

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant

since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2009-04-24 05:33 PM

I liked the title, and the poem,

~ARH

SeraphimBroken
Member

since 2009-03-09

Posts 74
USA

5 posted 2009-04-24 05:41 PM

A wonderful read!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

6 posted 2009-04-24 06:38 PM

Yes! That creative mind of yours is most assuredly a "treasure chest"!

Dream on! Write on!

EA

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2009-04-27 09:38 AM

My mind is still a treasure chest.
Overflowing with no bounds
Sights and smells. Angelic sounds.
Free, oh free. These dreams are free.
No, you can’t take that away from me.

But I can thank you for sharing your treasures. *S* Welcome to Passions! *S*

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