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WTBAKELAR
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0 posted 2009-04-22 09:42 PM


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You Knead Me

Oh, how I ache for your touch,
What I feel is hard to ignore,
Only you could know my needs,
You smile when I walk through your door,

You take me to your special room,
A place is made up just for me,
I remove my clothes with anticipation,
Of how good this is going to be,

When I’m ready for it, you come in,
I know what to expect,
You rub your hands along my neck,
With a pressure that’s just perfect,

Then you start to do your magic,
In a way none other compares,
You cover me with warm oil,
As you massage away my cares,

Your expert hands know every muscle,
And you never miss one place,
Oh, yes, all my stress and tension,
You thoroughly erase,

That feels so good, on my back and shoulders,
Arms, legs, feet and toes,
You reach every little contact point,
Some nobody else even knows,

So when these old bones have had enough,
And the stress has done me in,
I come to you for body work,
I need you to “knead me again.”




© Copyright 2009 Wm. Tracey Bakelar - All Rights Reserved
LindsayP
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1 posted 2009-04-22 11:48 PM



WTB she sounds like a real Gem, you better send me her address or phone number. But

there again you had better not, I'd only get into trouble. Great poem my friend.

Lindsay

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2 posted 2009-04-23 07:07 AM


Love the humour. All sheepish smiles.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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3 posted 2009-04-23 08:24 AM


Lindsay, my friend,  I will tell you, my massuse is wonderful.
Although I should clarify, it is not "every place".
That's a waste of money.  A really good sports massage is worth every penny.

Glad you enjoyed my massage, (that sounds so wrong)

Anyhow,  thanks for your kind comments,
Tracey

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4 posted 2009-04-23 08:26 AM


Prasad,  Yeh, I kinda left the door open, (so to speak) for interpretation.

Glad it made you smile.

Thanks, Tracey.

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5 posted 2009-04-23 09:02 AM


Loved this! *S*
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6 posted 2009-04-23 09:58 AM


sounds very relaxing

enjoyed

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7 posted 2009-04-23 06:03 PM


Watch that, young man, you almost had me going there for minute, but, then of course
I know you.  Like the way you put it together.


Love, Mom

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8 posted 2009-04-23 07:48 PM


I love an appreciative client! lol

Mind you, I never received a poem from one of them! Smiling here.

This delightful poem gives a whole different meaning to the word "knead"!

A friend in "knead" is a friend, in deed.


Linda

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9 posted 2009-04-23 09:27 PM


suthern, Thanks for dropping in for my massage.

SEA,  
Relaxing and then some,  I like to get and give a really good massage.


Thoroughly rubbed me right
Tracey

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10 posted 2009-04-23 09:30 PM


Mom,   Uh... Young Man?   Yeh, Younger than you by a few years,  (I won't tell)  I try to keep open clean, or on the fringe.  
My other (naughty) side is in Mature Content.

Glad you liked it.
Tracey

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11 posted 2009-04-23 09:33 PM


Linda,  I am so glad you liked my Kneady poem.  
If I was your client, I am sure I would write many lines about your qualities.

Love Tracey.

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