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You Knead Me
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You Knead Me |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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 You Knead Me Oh, how I ache for your touch, What I feel is hard to ignore, Only you could know my needs, You smile when I walk through your door, You take me to your special room, A place is made up just for me, I remove my clothes with anticipation, Of how good this is going to be, When I’m ready for it, you come in, I know what to expect, You rub your hands along my neck, With a pressure that’s just perfect, Then you start to do your magic, In a way none other compares, You cover me with warm oil, As you massage away my cares, Your expert hands know every muscle, And you never miss one place, Oh, yes, all my stress and tension, You thoroughly erase, That feels so good, on my back and shoulders, Arms, legs, feet and toes, You reach every little contact point, Some nobody else even knows, So when these old bones have had enough, And the stress has done me in, I come to you for body work, I need you to “knead me again.” |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
WTB she sounds like a real Gem, you better send me her address or phone number. But there again you had better not, I'd only get into trouble. Great poem my friend. Lindsay |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Love the humour. All sheepish smiles.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Lindsay, my friend, I will tell you, my massuse is wonderful. Although I should clarify, it is not "every place". That's a waste of money. A really good sports massage is worth every penny. Glad you enjoyed my massage, (that sounds so wrong) Anyhow, thanks for your kind comments, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Prasad, Yeh, I kinda left the door open, (so to speak) for interpretation. Glad it made you smile. Thanks, Tracey. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Loved this! *S* |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
sounds very relaxing enjoyed |
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Billie Cullimore Member
since 2009-03-27
Posts 315 |
Watch that, young man, you almost had me going there for minute, but, then of course I know you. Like the way you put it together. Love, Mom |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
I love an appreciative client! lol Mind you, I never received a poem from one of them! Smiling here. This delightful poem gives a whole different meaning to the word "knead"!  A friend in "knead" is a friend, in deed.  Linda |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
suthern, Thanks for dropping in for my massage. SEA, Relaxing and then some, I like to get and give a really good massage. Thoroughly rubbed me right Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Mom, Uh... Young Man? Yeh, Younger than you by a few years, (I won't tell) I try to keep open clean, or on the fringe. My other (naughty) side is in Mature Content. Glad you liked it. Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Linda, I am so glad you liked my Kneady poem. If I was your client, I am sure I would write many lines about your qualities. Love Tracey. |
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