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I Ate Your Heart
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I Ate Your Heart |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart 
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(Written from past experience, not from a recent relationship)  Today I ate your heart, it was good, sweet, so delicious...mmm! Red and juicy, moist, flavored with love, Salty but not bitter, filled me up. quinching my hunger. The taste I remember, like butter on a hot baked bun, So warm, soothing, like nothing I have tasted before. I have been saving it, to eat on a rainy day, so I would feel full, happy inside. Some parts remain, for me to eat later, Pieces and chunks, your heart is so big, one cannot consume it in a day, Ironic, how it fits perfectly, together between my sugar coated lips. Two kinds of sweetness, melt toegether, we are chocolate and creme, Later my stomach hurt, I begain to puke, and puke, It must have been, tainted, with love, from another, I ate your heart today, and died, my soul became poisioned, With hurt and pain, sometimes, food for the soul can kill you. My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray That I might find your arms, forever stay~Luke |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
R.H., Ok, The title grabbed me by the chest, and I went, Yuck, Then The picture came up and I had to rethink. Oh, Like a valentine heart. Nothing worse than Bad candy. or Poison. Be careful what you consume. Tracey. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear A Romantic Heart, This is a nice picture and poem Hon. I stay away from chocolate, it gives me hives. Love Bobby |
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