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the slang for tongue
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the slang for tongue |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
when the clever wranglings of time linger softly over the precipice of thought while coverlet droppings of dew-laden bits drop like the mellow rumblings of self-taught touches of a warm hand's brushing of the finger-strokes of attire melting like chocolate drippings o'er the desserts of desire satisfying the particular palate as though erudite was slang for tongue and good taste was to be accrued and never quite acquired |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
touches of a warm hand's brushing of the finger-strokes of attire melting like chocolate drippings o'er the desserts of desire I love this! *S* And the ending... *happy sigh*... just perfect! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
I agree with suthrn~ those were my favorite lines as well~ ARH |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Me to Steave, I enjoyed the read. Lindsay |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
suthern, thank you for reading and commenting...especially on those line, 'cause I liked them too...good to know they have a commonality to them ARH, I certainly do appreciate you stopping by and leaving a nice comment...thanks bunches...we seem to all be in agreement, at least  Lindsay, thank you for the nice comment...also appreciated, my friend....thanks |
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Raindance Member
since 2009-02-07
Posts 120West Coast |
I also enjoyed these lines, Steaven: touches of a warm hand's brushing of the finger-strokes of attire melting like chocolate drippings o'er the desserts of desire and the ending, very good! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
and good taste was to be accrued and never quite acquired. so very true. Slang for tongues tastes good. "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Dark Stranger Member Patricius
since 2001-03-19
Posts 13631West Coast |
enjoyed your art here amigo!! |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana |
This was a pleasure to read. Pure poetry in every line. Well done. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
Raindance, Thank you for your kind comments...so glad you not only found the time to read, but also glad that you found it worth your time to do so...appreciate it Prasad, Thanks for reading and leaving your thoughts...it is both welcome and appreciated Dark, a high compliment, dear sir, for you to qualify this piece as art means a lot to me...thank you for the wonderfully generous statements and certainly pleased to be called 'amigo', amigo CG, I am totally surprised, but surely appreciative of your remarks...I do not take them for granted. Question? Do you (as I do) live in an area surrounded by bayous? I am a Northerner and am not used to water outside the form of snow or ice. I believe my dogs could live on crawdads (and that's a whole 'nother story) |
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