Why you cry (repost for Passing Shadow)

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Open Poetry #44

Why you cry (repost for Passing Shadow)

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

0 posted 2009-04-21 06:21 PM

Do you feel the way I do?
Do you share the same heartache?
You can bleed and cry and want to die,
Or you can bend until you break,

It isn’t easy to be lonely,
It’s harder to be on your own,
When the ones you love have left you,
And all you feel is alone,

But take a look around you,
Tell me what you see,
More than you know, One really cares,
Watching over thee,

Lift up you chin and smile,
And listen to your heart,
Make today a happy place,
Don’t let sadness tear you apart,

For you have so much to live for,
And a life that’s meant to share.
Reach just a little farther up,
For your burdens, He will bear,

Listen to your heart again,
You‘ll hear the answers if you try,
You know He has a plan for you,
So, Tell me why you cry?

The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked.

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

1 posted 2009-04-21 10:07 PM

WTB, That is one great poem my friend

A real delight to read, the rhyming
and meter were spot on. Take care.

Lindsay

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

2 posted 2009-04-21 11:06 PM

Nice post.

Hopes she reads it.

CM

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-22 12:50 PM

Beautiful advice you've written, my friend. *S* When we're down, we sometimes forget to look up.

Greeneyes

Member Rara Avis

since 2000-09-09

Posts 9903
In Your Poetic Mind

4 posted 2009-04-22 02:44 PM

just the pick me up she needs....

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I never let one moment define me,
I define myself by all moments and how they teach and touch me......02

Billie Cullimore
Member

since 2009-03-27

Posts 315

5 posted 2009-04-22 09:28 PM

My Dear Son
I know who you are talking about even if some people don't. I love this poem it has so much meaning and wisdom. Thank you.
Billie C.

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

6 posted 2009-04-23 06:43 AM

Like the positive spirit.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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