Underneath The Misty Moon My Love Awaits

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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

0 posted 2009-04-21 04:29 PM

Underneath the misty moon he lay,
upon his dark ruby velvet cloak,
what words shall my heart convey?,
sweet words into his heart to soak.

This love, my heart has never known,
his fingers traced my lips of want,
his green eyes of loves' emerald stone,
enticing my dark eyes with sensual flaunt.

Deep into the passionate wells,
our bodies entwined, softly did drink,
my soul inside his soul dwells,
forever branded with loves' stained ink.

My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise
On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray
That I might find your arms, forever stay~Luke

Suncleaver
Member

since 2009-01-18

Posts 481
Stafford England

1 posted 2009-04-21 04:35 PM

I'm glad we shared this moment Millette, and you've wrapped it so delicately and lovingly in words.

I love you.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

2 posted 2009-04-21 04:37 PM

Luke~
Its nice to share moments,

moments of love and inspiration,
that allow you to express love so deeply,
thank you, for those special moments~

Luv you~

Chalmette Guy
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since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-21 04:46 PM

Wow, you two have a powerful and sensual love. Congrats and great poem.

A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03

Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart

4 posted 2009-04-21 04:47 PM

Thank You Chal~
it is so wonderful of you to compliment, both!

Namyh
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since 2009-01-20

Posts 988

5 posted 2009-04-21 07:56 PM

RomanticHeart - A "significant other" is only true when you stand as one too, each of you being a rock unto the other. And when a poetic work shines this sentiment from the inside out rather than from the outside in, it becomes a gem with its own light illuminating the passion in a Romantic Heart, even underneath a misty moon. And you did it so well. Loved it. Namyh

WTBAKELAR

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since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

6 posted 2009-04-21 08:54 PM

Now what did I do with that Velvet Cloak?

Very Very nice.
Tracey

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

7 posted 2009-04-22 10:17 AM

my soul inside his soul dwells,
forever branded with loves' stained ink.

Love guides your pen so well... this is beautiful! *S*

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member

since 2008-05-29

Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

8 posted 2009-04-23 06:37 AM

Lovely picture this, leaves in form of hearts and well written ARH.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

Eirian
Member

since 2009-04-13

Posts 70

9 posted 2009-04-24 04:52 AM

Utterly beautiful.

You and Luke are so very lucky to have each other

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

10 posted 2009-04-26 03:13 PM

Dreamy and poetic ARH ~ Just wonderful

ARCTIC WIND

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