Open Poetry #44 |
In Love She Whispered |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
I love she whispered 'Come to me', 'Forever mine, I draw you near', 'Our time will come and you will see', 'I am the one that holds you dear'. I took her hand and followed close To water's edge where she lay down, I held her tight in passion's throes And lips enclosed, her cries I drowned. We share our words, we share our breath, Our rivers mingle strong and deep, We lay until the dawn of death, Her heart is mine alone to keep. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
very romantic! |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
her heart is yours to keep~ ~ARH A nice little gift before I go to bed! Thank you for your tender thoughts and love~ My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray That I might find your arms, forever stay~Luke |
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Eirian Member
since 2009-04-13
Posts 70 |
Beautiful as always Luke. I left you a message on MSN regarding what we spoke about. |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
"I held her tight in passion's throes And lips enclosed, her cries I drowned." ...great lines...rooted deeply in romance...excellent write |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Suncleaver - nice passionate write... BC |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You whisper the sweetest love poems, Luke. Linda |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
Great poem Luke Very romantic and readable. Lindsay |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Beautifully romantic! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
mmmm...had to come back for a second helping of your love~ ~ARH |
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