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Open Poetry #44
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A Romantic Heart
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since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
0 posted 2009-04-20 03:18 PM




Go ahead, splash your color,
across the universe,
when your ink runs dry,
don't come crying to me,
to refill your quill!
© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Chalmette Guy
Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257
Louisiana
1 posted 2009-04-20 03:21 PM

This was kinda cool ARH.

I liked it. We should all follow this advice sometimes. Cool stuff.
Plus, bonus points for using the word 'quill' in a poem.
steavenr
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since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058
2 posted 2009-04-20 03:52 PM

I could never get my spilled ink to take the form of a heart, however, it does spill poetically in rhyme:  spots and blots

...nice write...provocatively thoughtful
Rosie_Orange
Junior Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 46
South Africa
3 posted 2009-04-20 04:57 PM

i 'splash' my colour every day... your words are truths, forgotten truths perhaps but ashonishing
SeraphimBroken
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since 2009-03-09
Posts 74
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4 posted 2009-04-20 05:11 PM

I got such a sweet chuckle out of this, I couldn't have said it better myself. So quick and to the point, with such poetic flair! Wonderful!
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