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Prasad Nataraj
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since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India

0 posted 2009-04-20 08:52 AM



Blue and Hue

Chirping voices of gray winged fairies,
Pitch black turning to hue and cobalt blue,
Crimson red monster summoned, awaken,
Anger orange spilled a splash all over.

A violent silver, silent flowing stream,
Lemon yellow sun on earth sway,
To the tunes of the purple gentle breeze,
Vienna brown turns to green.

Violet gray cotton floating above,
Off white colour palette does someone need?
Immense deep pleasure, a Prussian blue peek,
Through the minds window I seek.

The blue is bluer, green is greener,
It’s bright and brighter,
As I dance through the depths
Of moonlight, waiting for daybreak.

As the daylight waits for me,
Into her welcoming warm smile,
Into her stretched arms wide,
I am lost for another eternity.

April 17 2009
Prasad.N

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
1 posted 2009-04-20 09:04 AM


The blue is bluer, green is greener,
It’s bright and brighter,
As I dance through the depths
Of moonlight, waiting for daybreak.


Prasad.. these lines are my favourite.. your poem is very beautiful .. thank you RDB xx

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
2 posted 2009-04-20 10:44 AM


Very nice Prasad, a pleasure to read and to share the ideas...

have a nice day

yann

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2009-04-20 11:12 AM


ooooo, that's nice!

Prasad Nataraj
Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149
Bangalore,India
4 posted 2009-04-21 04:03 AM


Hi RDB,
Thank you so much for such kinds comments, so glad you liked these lines.

Hi Yann,
Thank you for lovely comments and good day wishes. Good day to you too.

Hi Passing Shadows,
Glad to read your comments.

Thank you all for taking time to read and comment on my poem. Good day wishes.

"Hardwork pays in the long run"

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