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| Open Poetry #44 |
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Blue and Hue |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India 
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Blue and Hue Chirping voices of gray winged fairies, Pitch black turning to hue and cobalt blue, Crimson red monster summoned, awaken, Anger orange spilled a splash all over. A violent silver, silent flowing stream, Lemon yellow sun on earth sway, To the tunes of the purple gentle breeze, Vienna brown turns to green. Violet gray cotton floating above, Off white colour palette does someone need? Immense deep pleasure, a Prussian blue peek, Through the minds window I seek. The blue is bluer, green is greener, It’s bright and brighter, As I dance through the depths Of moonlight, waiting for daybreak. As the daylight waits for me, Into her welcoming warm smile, Into her stretched arms wide, I am lost for another eternity. April 17 2009 Prasad.N "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
The blue is bluer, green is greener, It’s bright and brighter, As I dance through the depths Of moonlight, waiting for daybreak. Prasad.. these lines are my favourite.. your poem is very beautiful .. thank you RDB xx Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Very nice Prasad, a pleasure to read and to share the ideas... have a nice day yann |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
ooooo, that's nice! |
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Prasad Nataraj Senior Member
since 2008-05-29
Posts 1149Bangalore,India |
Hi RDB, Thank you so much for such kinds comments, so glad you liked these lines. Hi Yann, Thank you for lovely comments and good day wishes. Good day to you too. Hi Passing Shadows, Glad to read your comments. Thank you all for taking time to read and comment on my poem. Good day wishes.  "Hardwork pays in the long run" |
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