How to Join Member's Area Private Library Search Sanctuary Login
Main Forums Discussion Tech Talk Mature Content Archives

A home without a wall,
Our haven without ends,
A circle we all call
Our Family of Friends!

navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #44 » A Fairytale
Open Poetry #44
Post A Reply Post New Topic A Fairytale Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
A Romantic Heart
Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496
Forever In Your Heart
0 posted 2009-04-19 11:02 PM

            


[This message has been edited by A Romantic Heart (04-20-2009 01:13 AM).]
© Copyright 2009 Millette A. (Lester) Addison - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
1 posted 2009-04-20 08:56 AM

If it's a fairytale I can imagine you'd never want to turn the page or come up for air. Nice analogy.

Always do more than is required of you George Patton
jeannefiedler
New Member
since 2009-04-20
Posts 4
2 posted 2009-04-20 10:46 AM

Really different! Extremely imaginative. If this lover doesn't appreciate you, he's crazy, I was really touched!
Suncleaver
Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481
Stafford England
3 posted 2009-04-20 12:59 PM

Beautiful and tender.

I long to share this gentle moment and I love you deeply.

With love, Luke.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.
Post A Reply Post New Topic ⇧ top of page ⇧ Go to Previous / Newer Topic Back to Topic List Go to Next / Older Topic
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.
navwin » Archives » Open Poetry #44 » A Fairytale

Passions in Poetry | pipTalk Home Page | Main Poetry Forums | 100 Best Poems

How to Join | Member's Area / Help | Private Library | Search | Contact Us | Login
Discussion | Tech Talk | Archives | Sanctuary