Open Poetry #44 |
Conundrum. |
Windhover Member
since 2003-11-17
Posts 179UK |
How do I begin to write and formulate an unfeigned verse? How can I draw with pencilled line; what I cannot describe in words? For who can etch the wakening dawn... the promise of a young spring day? and who can hold a snowflake and describe it, 'ere it melts away? These are such problems as I face each time I try to capture you in words, or lines... it's just the same; you still elude me, come what may. But, what is this elusive part of you, which never can be found? Is it Beauty, Radiance; Grace?... or just Charisma; sweet, profound? The answer to this circumstance would seem a simple point of view, the key to this conundrum lies within the way I look at you. For I should look with Artist eyes, that calculate the shapes I see; but I would look with lover's eyes... and thus, am lost... so hopelessly. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"but I would look with lover's eyes... and thus, am lost... so hopelessly." for sure, it's hard to do enjoyed this, as always |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
the key to this conundrum lies within the way I look at you This is the most poignant line in the poem. Nice writing. enjoyed this. |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
How incredibly beautiful! *S* If I had to choose a favorite part, it would be the ending... but every line is lovely and loving. Superb!!! |
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