Open Poetry #44 |
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Bones Foster Family Loves Him |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania ![]() |
Bones foster family loves him to bits and pieces. Oh, they surely do. Bones is a God-send, he means the world to them. I mean, just look at the facts. Here’s a kid that can work in the barn, he’ll do anything you tell him to, then you can bring him in at night, and he’ll clean your house, top to bottom. He’ll work his heart out for you. He’s easy, he’s malleable, he’s scared half to death. To top it all off, you get paid to supposedly take care of him. Is that a deal or what? Bobby |
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Marc-Andre Senior Member
since 2008-12-07
Posts 501 |
Rather unsettling and thought-provoking, a nice write that strongly delivers the message. Mark |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
I know it happens. I have a young guy working for me now that was adopted with four of his siblings but it was for the government financial benefits that they were takin in. There's no bond of love there and this young man's adopted parents worked the living daylights out of him. Sad very very sad! Eric |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Mark, I'm pleased that the message came through for you. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Eric, There are a load of sad stories out there. There's a difference in the U. S. between adoptive parents, and the foster parent system. In the U. S. the foster parent system is the pits for the kids involved. Bobby |
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WindWalker11 Junior Member
since 2008-12-24
Posts 41 |
This is very thought-provoking! Your poems always make me think!!!! |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks WindWalker11, For the very kind words on my poems. Bobby |
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Juju Member Elite
since 2003-12-29
Posts 3429In your dreams |
I have allot of adopted friends. They hate adoption. Kind of sad because alot of poeple in my family are adopted. We were farm families, but they did the same work as the other kids and got a collage education [In 1910 not common] But they never came back after collage. My mom told me of other families however that used kids as slaves. It is quite sad. -Juju |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Fine writing...James |
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viking_metal Senior Member
since 2007-02-02
Posts 1337In a Jeep, Minnesota. |
Bones ought to run away. He can do better on his own. -P Some people fall in love and touch the sky, some people fall in love and find quicksand. |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Juju, There is usually a vast difference between adoption and foster parents. Adoptive parents usually love the kids. The foster parents are paid by the government to take care of the kids. Foster parents are in it for the money. There’s no love involved. Love Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks James, I'm pleased it worked for you. Bobby |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks Paul, He did get away from that place, and did do good. Bobby |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You speak with impact of a very sad situation in which oh so many children found themselves struggling. Love, Margherita |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Thanks dear Margherita, For the kind words on the poem. It has always been my contention that even in the best situation, there is no such thing as a happy childhood. Love Bobby |
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