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Open Poetry #44
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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
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0 posted 2009-01-09 10:26 AM

i helped them get back together
talked him into 400 dollars
and a couple of letters
now im glad that it wasnt meant to be
now i know
that you and your friends
have betrayed me
long ago i never knew
now your careless words
have ruined you
i tried
but your two faces
brought tears to my eyes
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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-01-09 10:44 AM

It would appear to me that you have a caring  heart and had the best of intentions. Believing that you have been betrayed can cut deeply into that sensitive heart of yours.

May 2009 be a year of wonderful new beginnings!
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norunnin
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since 2008-10-16
Posts 71
2 posted 2009-01-09 11:29 AM

you are completely correct. i am a big softie.
but i dont think i am going to give her any more help. i dont think she deserves it.
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