Breath of Experience - pipTalk Forums

How to Join	Member's Area	Private Library	Search	Sanctuary		Login
Main Forums	Discussion	Tech Talk	Mature Content	Archives	A home without a wall, Our haven without ends, A circle we all call Our Family of Friends!

Open Poetry #44

Breath of Experience

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2009-04-17 10:11 AM

Breath of Experience

Exhaled, in perfumed air makes mist
Warming flesh, fears thaw away
Docile dimensions, new dawn has kissed
In turn, delight the droplets play

Breathe in, breathe out, to moist the lips
As rain, caress all cares away
To let bestow in chiffon sips
In turn, delight the droplets play

Inhale as well, the taste of truth
For certain shared in warm winds sway
The chill of changes, calm and sooth
In turn, delight the droplets play

Discovery, shared bask of steam
These vapors love relinquished lay
As if created deep in dream
In turn, delight the droplets play

Copyright Kkh 4/17/09

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-04-17 10:12 AM

My first Kyrielle. Thank you EA, for the inspiration. Enjoyed exploring this.

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

2 posted 2009-04-17 10:21 AM

What is a Kyrielle exactly?

And...wow, you make breathing sensous, as it is when shared with someone to breathe in, and breathe out...

Your talent amazes me, always.

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2009-04-17 03:09 PM

yes, you are a joy to read!

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

4 posted 2009-04-18 01:21 PM

I very much enjoyed the poem and the structure within. Now I have leared
another word for the day...

Thanx Kath...you inspire ... and so
does EA as well....thank you both for
your gifts you give so unselfishly.

critical mass
Member

since 2009-03-25

Posts 275
Michigan

5 posted 2009-04-18 08:13 PM

very nicely done.

Inhale as well, the taste of truth
For certain shared in warm winds sway
The chill of changes, calm and sooth
In turn, delight the droplets play

I liked this one the best.
but they were all good.

steavenr
Member Elite

since 2003-11-17

Posts 4058

6 posted 2009-04-20 12:02 PM

I love poetry that reads like poetry...and this one certainly fits the bill...nice form, btw...lovely write

	⇧ top of page ⇧
All times are ET (US). All dates are in Year-Month-Day format.