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Fantasy Love Of A Star
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Fantasy Love Of A Star |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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 Fantasy Love Of A Star The melody of his eyes sang to me Sang of rivers that are so blue the world that I lived in faded there was a crowd, but I only saw you Reflections of love left me and was planted upon his face could this be what it's like, to loos ones soul being with him and no other place I just want to hold him close and be the shirt upon his back I want to be the food on his plate I would give anything; to be even that He is gone! and I never got to touch him he is gone! and I never said a word My love couldn't be any stronger but I don't belong in his world, Annie 15-4-2009 |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo dear Annie, This is nice work. The poem is well planned and well carried out. Love Bobby |
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poetman Junior Member
since 2009-03-30
Posts 10 |
hey really enjoyed it good poem Poetman |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Anniepimm - a most loving poem, well written... BC |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Wow Bobby: Thank you  coming from you that is praise indeed i am honored sir..And Poetman: Thank you I am glad you liked it Bill: thank you for your lovely feed back  |
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