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Anniepimm
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since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England

0 posted 2009-04-15 06:19 AM



Fantasy Love Of A Star

The melody of his eyes sang to me
Sang of rivers that are so blue
the world that I lived in faded
there was a crowd, but I only saw you

Reflections of love left me
and was planted upon his face
could this be what it's like, to loos ones soul
being with him and no other place

I just want to hold him close
and be the shirt upon his back
I want to be the food on his plate
I would give anything; to be even that

He is gone! and I never got to touch him
he is gone! and I never said a word
My love couldn't be any stronger
but I don't belong in his world,

Annie
15-4-2009

© Copyright 2009 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-15 11:38 AM


Yo dear Annie,

This is nice work.  The poem is well planned and well carried out.

Love Bobby

poetman
Junior Member
since 2009-03-30
Posts 10

2 posted 2009-04-15 01:03 PM


hey

really enjoyed it good poem

Poetman

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2009-04-15 01:15 PM


Anniepimm - a most loving poem, well written...

BC

Anniepimm
Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550
England
4 posted 2009-04-15 02:41 PM


Wow Bobby: Thank you coming from you that is praise indeed i am honored sir..

And Poetman: Thank you I am glad you liked it

Bill: thank you for your lovely feed back

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