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Chalmette Guy
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0 posted 2009-04-14 04:39 PM


Once in a lifetime comes that storm
All factors converge at the perfect time
Lines intersect as if you were charmed
When gone, to reconstruct in your mind

That feeling of completeness, the sum of parts
One being with the same heated desires
One being made of two random hearts
To melt together in the flames of their fire

Penetration absolute and to the core
Deeper even than you ever thought could be
Deeper than this and much, much more
A part of you touched that only they can see

And when cruel time cleaves with no reason
As time always and ever does
You yearn more, in hopes to capture that feeling
To return again to what that once was


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"Penetration absolute and to the core
Deeper even than you ever thought could be
Deeper than this and much, much more
A part of you touched that only they can see"

perfectly said

Namyh
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2 posted 2009-04-14 10:30 PM


Chalmette Guy - There is an innate desire of the human condition to return to where it was happy, safe and warm in the womb. After this world beats up on us enough, we yearn for that protective coat. Thanks for a reminder to not be forgotten. Enjoyed this. Namyh
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And when cruel time cleaves with no reason
As time always and ever does
You yearn more, in hopes to capture that feeling
To return again to what that once was

You begin with an unexpected gift... and close with an unending yearn... and write the best of life in between. *S* Beautiful work!!

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