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Perfect Storm
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Perfect Storm |
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Chalmette Guy Senior Member
since 2009-03-11
Posts 1257Louisiana 
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Once in a lifetime comes that storm All factors converge at the perfect time Lines intersect as if you were charmed When gone, to reconstruct in your mind That feeling of completeness, the sum of parts One being with the same heated desires One being made of two random hearts To melt together in the flames of their fire Penetration absolute and to the core Deeper even than you ever thought could be Deeper than this and much, much more A part of you touched that only they can see And when cruel time cleaves with no reason As time always and ever does You yearn more, in hopes to capture that feeling To return again to what that once was |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"Penetration absolute and to the core Deeper even than you ever thought could be Deeper than this and much, much more A part of you touched that only they can see" perfectly said  |
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Namyh Senior Member
since 2009-01-20
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Chalmette Guy - There is an innate desire of the human condition to return to where it was happy, safe and warm in the womb. After this world beats up on us enough, we yearn for that protective coat. Thanks for a reminder to not be forgotten. Enjoyed this. Namyh |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And when cruel time cleaves with no reason As time always and ever does You yearn more, in hopes to capture that feeling To return again to what that once was You begin with an unexpected gift... and close with an unending yearn... and write the best of life in between. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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