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Apache Rain.
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Apache Rain. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England 
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Apache Rain. None has there been so beautiful as you your presence shines aloud the sun awakens when you are there and chases away every cloud, the graceful way you walk into the wind the flow Of your beautiful black hair the day has permanent sunshine the very minute you are there, your eyes of black, that show the love and the compassion of your grace is etched in your flawless beauty of your angelic Apache face, “Apache rain” please never change your very soul is your endeavour and the memory of your existence will live no moor, “Forever” Annie 31-7-2008 |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Annie~ I liked the title ... it drew me in for a nice read~ *Huglets*  ~*Marge*~ ~*The sound of a kiss is not as strong as that of a cannon, but it's echo endures much longer*~ |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you Marge, It was writen about a friends horse belive it or not Her name was Apache Rain, "the horse, not my friend"  |
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nourzihane Member
since 2008-07-10
Posts 254Algeria |
Annie i can't comment because you have beautiful writen. my kisses Nourzihane |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thank you |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Annie, the title drew me in too, and OH, WHEN I SAW IT WAS ABOUT A HORSE, it made my day!!! I read it 3 times more. I am animal-crazy, and the well-salted Pipsters know so much about my darling Flicka who went to Heaven on 28 April 2002. I have written many poems about him before and since his death. He was the most wonderful horse in the world, but Apache Rain sounds absolutely wonderful too. Thank you so very much for writing such a wonderful poem about her. I wasn't sure if she is still alive. The part at the end was a little ambiguous. If she isn't, she will have met my beloved Flicka in Heaven and they will be wonderful friends. He loves everyone, people and animals of all kinds. If she is still alive, please will you (or your friend) give Apache Rain lots of hugs and kisses and eye to eye talk and nose to nose rubs from Auntie Di from sunny South Africa. Owl |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Upon reading in your reply that stated this poem is about a friend's horse that had passed, I went back to enjoy your words even more the second time around! I'm glad that Diana got to read this beauty. Her response brought a smile to my face. I can imagine Flicks and Apache Rain galloping together ~ spirited and free, on heaven's green pastures!  Linda |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thanks every one Sadly Owl Apache Rain passed away, but she had a long and wonderful life full of love and she was pampered, She didnt have a good start in life but she finished her life in the best home, And she was loved... |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
The tears are flowing for Apache Rain's passing. However, I am very happy that she ended her life where she was very loved. Believe me, she WILL have met Flicka (as Linda - Earth Angel confirmed! smiles!), because Flicka will have met her at the gate. As I said Flicka absolutely adores all animals (and people) and they all adore him too and he will have shown Apache Rain around Heaven and all its green meadows where they will spend many hours galloping and rolling and playing and grazing and he will have introduced her to everyone in Heaven and so she will have lots and lots of friends and be very happy and she and Flicka will meet your friend and you at the gate when you get there. - Owl |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
I believe you are right Owl I am a spiritualist and one of my guides is a beautiful white stallion my friend and fellow medium Val has seen him I unfortunately have not, but she tels me he is a beauty, Sorry if i have freaked anyone out |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
I am glad you understand, Annie. You didn't freak me out. Let me tell you a secret. All animals are real beauties. Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
You unravel your beautiful heart with this one, dear Annie, and most assuredly "Apache Rain" feels your love. Interesting thread, with Diana's added emotions too ... Love, Margherita  |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
your words and the responses bring a big smile to my face and warm feeling to my heart so beautiful ! The only time we waste is the time we spend thinking we are alone. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Awww thank you my friends the comments are lovely.. |
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