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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
My thoughts shivering ones scared ones usual ones surprised ones hiding ones important ones stupid ones settled ones tamed ones ecological ones sports ones. My thoughts academic ones lavished ones humorous ones artful ones logical ones friendly ones independant ones warm ones popular ones political ones family ones. My thoughts wheeled ones scribbled ones light ones drowned ones erotic ones rational ones economic ones lovely ones caring ones selfish ones outgoing ones. My thoughts a virtual world. |
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Anniepimm Senior Member
since 2008-12-26
Posts 550England |
Thoughtful poem.. Must of taken quite awhile to write |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Yann, did you just read my thoughts? This is quite the vision of a busy mind! Just so! Love, Margherita  |
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Roniece Dawson-Bruce Member Ascendant
since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689Sydney, Australia |
enjoyed all these wonderful thoughts of yours Yann.. RDB Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight......... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
~ and you relay all those thoughts into some mighty fine poems!  Keep on thinking! ~ and writing! Warm hug 'n a smile, Linda  |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thank you annie for passing by and sharing this comment. I worked with a dictionary for this one. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Margherita, I'm sure in one day we can have all this thoughts and may be more...thank you for your kind comment yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thanks Ronice for the kind comment. yann |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Thank you Linda, thoughts are phenomenal cause they exist and they are immaterial...How could we explain that ? have a nice day. yann |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
2islander2 - many thoughts expressed in this writing, however, they are all to be thought of... BC |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yann, People with real humility don't mind hearing from Bones. Bobby |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful thoughts so well presented Yann. Eric |
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steavenr Member Elite
since 2003-11-17
Posts 4058 |
much care into the craft...no wonder someone once said that greatness is not in the presentation, it is in the preparation...this write helps prove that...nicely done |
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