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The clouds |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa 
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Formerly and prior to the eventful clouds of forgetfulness o’er laid the land. Oh, happy, happy, happy days when unto men and women came nimbus, stratus, cumulus, as rulers of our kingdom and dictators of our truth. But time in its own time and in the manner of a despot chases all the clouds away and leaves the happy naked and shivering. Then suddenly from out the blue the clarity of mind and the recall of other times and I call the clouds, sometimes I do, when naked in my love of you! Helen / 9 April 2009 |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
BEAUTIFUL!!!! Helen, this is absolutely a gorgeous write in both thoughts and presentation. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
thoughtful and beautifully written. yann |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Too cool! What a great metaphorical reference too. Love the sage wisdom in this. Write'em up! Eric |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Honeybunch, this is absolutely beautiful. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Cirrus-ly, Honey, this is a stunning write!  Love 'n a hug, Linda  |
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Honeybunch Member Rara Avis
since 2001-12-29
Posts 7115South Africa |
Thank you all so much for your kind comments. I "cirrus-ly" (Linda, you're good) appreciate them. Love Helen |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
Touching and beautiful poem, Helen. Ida |
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critical mass Member
since 2009-03-25
Posts 275Michigan |
Honeybunch Nice use of a metahor Liked this qyite a bit |
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