Open Poetry #44 |
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Entice my Heart (Petrarchan sonnet dedicated to ARH) |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England ![]() |
My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray That I might find your arms, forever stay Though many men our love they may despise, With passion's throes shall our love pierce the skies, In pillars of lustful flame we allay The fears of gods who believe that we stray, Come, welcome up the desire in my eyes. Alas! May dreams truly conquer the sea? Can love give flight to whispers of our hearts? I will not stay, reside miserably, I will not suffer us to be apart, Come, speak again and give me hope to see That destiny entwined us from the start. When I see your face all the angels are shamed. |
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since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
She's bound to love it... it's beautiful! *S* |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Your heart, I may entice, but love it all the more, bold and brave, a sacrifice, devoted and true to the core, Your words penned just for me, even though they could start, evil thoughts of jealousy, aimed to bruise my loving heart, No words, shall prevail, nor thought, nor remark, what our love will reveal, to loves' journey we embark. ~Thank You, Beloved, most precious are your words for me, penned in perfect poetry~(Little Romantic Heart) |
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since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Just add some Elizabethan English and you got Shakespeare! lol. This really did remind me of Shakespeare's work. ![]() -Zach We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion. |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
beautiful in it's ache.... ![]() |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Such beauty sad and very well written! Eric |
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