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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-04-09 04:55 PM


My love, in dreams entice my heart to rise
On silver wings o'er oceans cold spray
That I might find your arms, forever stay
Though many men our love they may despise,
With passion's throes shall our love pierce the skies,
In pillars of lustful flame we allay
The fears of gods who believe that we stray,
Come, welcome up the desire in my eyes.
Alas! May dreams truly conquer the sea?
Can love give flight to whispers of our hearts?
I will not stay, reside miserably,
I will not suffer us to be apart,
Come, speak again and give me hope to see
That destiny entwined us from the start.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2009-04-09 05:38 PM


She's bound to love it... it's beautiful! *S*
A Romantic Heart
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2 posted 2009-04-09 06:05 PM


Your heart, I may entice,
but love it all the more,
bold and brave, a sacrifice,
devoted and true to the core,

Your words penned just for me,
even though they could start,
evil thoughts of jealousy,
aimed to bruise my loving heart,

No words, shall prevail,
nor thought, nor remark,
what our love will reveal,
to loves' journey we embark.


~Thank You, Beloved,
most precious are your words
for me, penned in perfect poetry~(Little Romantic Heart)



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3 posted 2009-04-09 08:53 PM


Just add some Elizabethan English and you got Shakespeare! lol. This really did remind me of Shakespeare's work.

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

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4 posted 2009-04-09 09:28 PM


beautiful in it's ache....
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5 posted 2009-04-10 02:55 AM


Such beauty sad and very well written!

Eric

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