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zaxby
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since 2009-03-05
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0 posted 2009-04-09 01:17 PM


Tectonic plates shifting in earthen miasma
scattering ant’s race madly on surfaces worn with age.
Convulsing gravitational pulses move this weary planet
in bonding glory with our sun.

Galaxies seethe towards the ultimate fractal
bursting through in convulsive orgy
a touch of paint for the newest picture.

Eons pass with the whisper of Gods breath,
time releases all to dust.
Cosmic swirls in a fantasy parade,
flow sources of life in a dervish dance.

Space the ultimate blanket,
wraps itself on bonded atoms of infinite matter.
Caressing multi dimensional regions of being
a child whose cries can never be heard.

Energy pulses in and out feeding each biological creation
till all becomes absolute extension of being.
Imbued soul structure amassing spirit for a wild ride
towards the reveal.

[This message has been edited by zaxby (04-10-2009 07:44 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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1 posted 2009-04-10 05:53 PM


I'll ignore the typo (tectonic) because I enjoyed the entire dip into universal chaos.

"Cosmic swirls in a fantasy parade,
flow sources of life in a dervish dance."


ethome
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2 posted 2009-04-10 06:02 PM


We try to project as little insignificant beings here but we're squinting and  although we think we're smart we basically know nothing.
Sometimes patting ourselves on the back for reasons only we can explain leaving out the sub rosa of love.

Great poem.

Eric

zaxby
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3 posted 2009-04-10 07:44 PM


oops, thanks midnight
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