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Open Poetry #44

Delicate Abandon

Chalmette Guy
Senior Member

since 2009-03-11

Posts 1257
Louisiana

0 posted 2009-04-09 09:36 AM

She let her head back and laughed in delicate abandon
Eyes so luminous he wanted to get lost within them
Brushed her hair aside with her hand and he felt he died
So much feeling welled up inside him that he almost cried
Life so intense inside her and a spirit of untamable will
A soul of such strength that even time cannot kill
She yearns for something that she cannot express
And speaks in a voice that she’s learned to suppress
One by one they fall, the excuses she learned to accept
Until nothing remains and only one thought is left
That of him so far away, to be with him and oh so near
To hear whispers just for her planted in her golden ear
Promises of sense shattering mind altering love from him
If only she would give herself to delicate abandon

SEA

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Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

1 posted 2009-04-09 09:43 AM

aha the magic words...."if only"

enjoyed this

Anniepimm
Senior Member

since 2008-12-26

Posts 550
England

2 posted 2009-04-09 10:39 AM

Deep and meaningful poem
I really enjoyed reading it
I feeling most have had in there lives at least once
Thank you for sharing..

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

3 posted 2009-04-09 02:14 PM

The yearn of this... both hers and his... mesmerizes. *S* Beautiful title... beautiful work!!

rad802
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since 2008-04-19

Posts 279
KY U.S.A.

4 posted 2009-04-12 10:16 AM

I like this.
Good work.
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Rick Delmonico

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

5 posted 2009-04-12 10:59 AM

Great work!
Some people keep themselves so gaurded for many reasons that differ from person to person.
But those feelings are still there and they long to come out.
I thought you penned this very well.
Title is excellent.

Eric

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