Open Poetry #44 |
It Was Written Into The First Star Birth |
OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
IT WAS WRITTEN INTO THE FIRST STAR BIRTH 4 August 2001 You make my sky tremble on the lip prints of a song ... a wind song of forest whispers and beguiling waters that tell tales of long ago and of the slow æons of tear drop secrets that formed and grew in moss and fern and lichen and painted you and me in primordial destiny. - Owl |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Diana, what a precious gem this is! Absolutely awesome. A keeper! Love, Margherita |
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Oklahoma Rose Senior Member
since 2008-02-28
Posts 1586Oklahoma USA |
Diane, I love the way ou write. |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
Hi Owl, this is exquisite and beautifully written. yann |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
there is a common thread that unites us all in your glorious words |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
What beautiful thoughts, Diana. Ida |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you, Margherita. I am glad you felt it so well. Thank you, Sue. I am honoured by what you say. Thank you, Yann for your beautiful comment. Thanks, Michele, for seeing that. Thanks, Ida. I am glad you thought so. Owl |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
a wind song of forest whispers and beguiling waters that tell tales of long ago ~*~ Ah, Camelot! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thanks, Karilea. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Owl |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
You make my sky tremble on the lip prints of a song ... a wind song of forest whispers and beguiling waters that tell tales of long ago To meet someone who literally changes our world is a blessing... even if it's one we can't keep within our grasp. *S* Beautiful work!! |
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poddarku Senior Member
since 2008-01-15
Posts 589india |
the lip prints of a song... It is Classic you. A writing blessed with a spirit so high we can only bow before it. clever talks delay friendship! |
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OwlSA Member Rara Avis
since 2005-11-07
Posts 9347Durban, South Africa |
Thank you so much, Ruth. Kushal, you honour me so greatly, in spite of your own excellence. Thank you, my friend. Owl |
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