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JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
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Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

0 posted 2009-04-07 08:30 PM


Giving Enough to Spend the Night

French women are allright.
I've met a few in my life.
I met Michelle walking on a
country rode beside a meandering canal.
As she jumped onto the back of my bike
she mentioned a dance later that night.
She told me we could have some fun
down the rode a piece in the town of Verdun.
The dance was quite nice
and afterwords I held her tight.
Later that night she wanted more,
more than I was willing to give,
but still I did, giving enough
to spend the night, she was
nothing more than a sensual delite.

JamesLee
07April
2009



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Robert E. Jordan
Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541
Philadelphia, Pennsylvania
1 posted 2009-04-07 08:34 PM


James,

Tell me you didn’t misspell “road” on purpose.

Bobby

LindsayP
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since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria
2 posted 2009-04-08 11:32 PM



Sounds like it was your lucky night James.

You are a very lucky fellow. Take care

Lindsay

2islander2
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since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825
by the sea
3 posted 2009-04-09 01:59 AM


Hi James, you were lucky enough in Verdun to meet some happy girl, I think that being a stranger is sometimes easier in relationships, your poem don't say what happened next.

have  a nice day.

yann

ethome
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since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
4 posted 2009-04-09 04:11 AM


Interesting twist for a romantic like you James but I like the story.

I'm smiling at Bobby's comment.

Eric

Roniece Dawson-Bruce
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since 2000-01-29
Posts 5689
Sydney, Australia
5 posted 2009-04-09 06:18 AM


James..this was fun to read.... oh how I love French people!!   

RDB

Be kind at heart....for everyone you meet has their own battle to fight.........

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