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Open Poetry #44

....shadow.

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

0 posted 2009-04-07 07:13 PM

"shadow"
abegail villaran matias

i can lie and never let anyone figure out the truth,
i can laugh so hard that no one would ever think i cried.
i'll run so fast that no one would ever know i've nowhere to go.
i'll wear a smile and you wont see the pain behind it..

***

i can pretend i'm happy when everyone's around..
i can hide away and i'll never be found.
it's so easy to deceive you by the way that i speak..
that you'll never even notice that im turning weak.

***

and there's so many things you'll never know about me,
there's a lot of me you wont ever get to see..
there's a side of me that you'll never get to know,
and that's the part that chose to let you go.

***

there's a lot of thingsyou'll never know about me,
there's so much you wont get to see..
i can open up my soul and still,all i'll ever be;
is just a silhoutte of the person you thought of me..

***

"omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

WTBAKELAR

Senior Member

since 2008-09-09

Posts 1089
Utah, USA

1 posted 2009-04-07 07:21 PM

_Patch, Wow, I really like this,
Although, Don't ever let anybody else change what you yourself can be.
Be the strong person I see in this poem. and show that strength to those that didn't take time to know the real you.

You are wonderful.

Love, Tracey.

Juju
Member Elite

since 2003-12-29

Posts 3429
In your dreams

2 posted 2009-04-07 08:36 PM

This is lovely. Keep it up. I will stay tuned.

Juju

-Juju

-"So you found a girl
Who thinks really deep thoughts
What's so amazing about really deep thoughts " Silent all these Years, Tori Amos

i_am_patch!
Member

since 2008-06-24

Posts 108
manila, philippines

3 posted 2009-04-07 08:59 PM

thanks guys.....wtblake,,,,juju,,,,
woah. wish i could tell you guys how beautiful the view is right here where im at....and write a poem about it.

"omnia vincit amor"
LOVE OVERCOMES EVERYTHING

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