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I Love You More
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I Love You More |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA 
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 I Love You More I said; “I love you”, She said; “I love you more”, And I thought, How could she love me more? Does she know how much I care about her? Does she feel that warmth of security knowing I am hers? And know I have nothing to worry about when we are apart? Could she kind of melt when I kiss her? Or get that little high, when I touch her? The warmth I feel in her embrace? Oh, and what it means to me when we make love, How could someone love me that much? Am I worth that kind of devotion? What did I do to deserve this woman? She told me; “We are in this together forever”, I said; “I love you”, She said; “I love you more” The answer is always NO, Until the question is asked. |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
wow. your poem,,,,,it left me... speechless. "omnia vincit amor" |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
Part of love's magic is that, when we're lucky, we get more than we deserve. *S* Beautiful write! *S* |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
_Patch, Thank you so much, That is so complimentary, It is appreciated. If you get a chance, read my poem; "I said, I love you" Love always, Tracey. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Suthern *, I am the magician, If you asked me how I got so lucky, I would have to say; It's magic. Thank you for your wonderful comments, and for always being a friend. Love, Tracey. |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
this is such a romantic poem....so completely sweet! very much enjoyed!!  |
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HopeS Member Elite
since 2000-12-22
Posts 4596Perth Western Australia |
Beautiful love and togetherness expressed Hope |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Suzy, Thanks for your wonderful comments, I guess I am kind of a romantic, at heart. Love is a forever thing, Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Hope, If only I could write like you, I would be thrilled. To have you enjoy my poetry is a wonderful compliment. Thank you so much. Tracey. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
There is such a tender note that rings throughout this very beautiful poem, dear Tracey. The sweet competition of who loves more ... ahh! Love, Margherita  |
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Robert E. Jordan Member Rara Avis
since 2008-01-25
Posts 8541Philadelphia, Pennsylvania |
Yo WTBAKELAR, I don't think love is a more, or less thing. It's either there or it isn't. Bobby |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
WTBAKELAR - a true romantic for sure, nice writing... BC |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
A pleasure to read...James |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Margherita, Bobby, A very wise man told me, long ago; Don't expect to get love, if you don't give love, If you take it with out giving back, the giver will run out, and have nothing left. That's when love ends. When both give everything, it is a constant flow between the two, and forever stays fresh. Thank you so much for your kind comments. Love Tracey |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Bill, James, Thank you both for your sincere and kind comments, Your thoughts are both very much appreciated. Love, Tracey |
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LindsayP Member Elite
since 2007-07-28
Posts 3410Australia, Victoria |
You certainly have a way with words my friend, that is a beautiful heart touching romantic poem, I read it and reread it and enjoyed both. Take care. Lindsay |
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varun Junior Member
since 2009-04-05
Posts 13Punjab,India |
Very well written Sir The emotions touched my heart |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
Thanks, Lindsay, coming from you, The word master, I appreciate your praise. Sincerly, Your friend, Tracey. |
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WTBAKELAR
since 2008-09-09
Posts 1089Utah, USA |
varun, thank you again for your kind comments, I look forward to reading your works. Tracey. |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Totally charming ~ from beginning to end! Only a loving, sweetie pie of a man, could have written this!   Linda |
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