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Osprey
Member

since 2009-04-12

Posts 249

0 posted 2009-05-30 07:48 PM

I know that love is mere' her scent
It lingered there when I awoke
As into love's warm-breast ascent
I replayed every word she spoke.
For every second that we spent
No other could such joy evoke

Great artists' dreams could not enhance
Her beauty in that black shift dress
When gifted of her claiming glance
No ounce of love could I suppress.
So know that I will ever dance
In her undying tenderness

The softness of her inner thighs
The fruits of love that tantalize
My whispered name on entry sighs
Sweet rapture touched, no compromise.
Those melting sapphires in her eyes
That's love, I've come to realise

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

1 posted 2009-05-30 08:05 PM

Very beautiful

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

2 posted 2009-05-30 08:38 PM

A beautiful love write.

serenity blaze
Member Empyrean

since 2000-02-02

Posts 27738

3 posted 2009-05-30 08:54 PM

This is truly elegant.

(and um, I'd say "don't go"--but I respect that if you feel the need, okay. But send postcards, k?)

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2009-05-31 01:50 AM

Enjoyed...James

Kaoru

Member Elite

since 2003-06-07

Posts 3892
where the wild flowers grow

5 posted 2009-05-31 01:52 AM

This is a beautiful write. Enjoyed.

K

Shadow Angel
Junior Member

since 2009-05-31

Posts 29
New Zealand

6 posted 2009-05-31 07:54 AM

~ Hiya Osprey,

I'm new here, and I'm stoked to have read this poem of yours...impeccable rhyme and meter, my friend, it makes this piece a dream to read out loud...so beautifully romantic

*hugs*

Sasha xx

Bloodline
Member

since 2009-05-23

Posts 236
Oklahoma

7 posted 2009-05-31 09:14 AM

A breathless read and sweet
romance in every word,

Bloodline

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

8 posted 2009-05-31 09:22 AM

Absolutely captivating romantic write, resonating very harmoniously.

Love,
Margherita

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

9 posted 2009-05-31 12:46 PM

Sweet rapture touched, no compromise.
Those melting sapphires in her eyes

~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~

Oh sigh, and sigh again!!

A real beauty this is.

viking_metal
Senior Member

since 2007-02-02

Posts 1337
In a Jeep, Minnesota.

10 posted 2009-05-31 12:49 PM

Lucky you.

Wicked write.

-P

Everyone deserves to be loved, even you.

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

11 posted 2009-06-03 12:05 PM

"That's love, I've come to realise"

~ Of that, I have not doubt! I could feel the warm glow of love radiating from your words!

Sweet and sensuous!

EA

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

12 posted 2009-06-03 05:23 PM

nice read

LindsayP
Member Elite

since 2007-07-28

Posts 3410
Australia, Victoria

13 posted 2009-06-03 10:45 PM

Hello Osprey, you are a very good poet and this one was no exception. The meter and

rhyming were a delight to read.
Take care my friend and keep up the good work.

Lindsay

Bill Charles
Member Patricius

since 2000-07-11

Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now

14 posted 2009-06-04 12:34 PM

Osprey - very romantic write...

BC

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