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vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

0 posted 2009-04-05 05:32 PM

When Someone Loves You

We must be patients
In life
We must be steady and satisfy
our goals
In life
When heart beats
Unbroken
Harmony of life
With sweet love and peace
When someone loves you
The pain continues
Through out your life
Everyone wants to be free
When love sets our heats free
I yearn for love
I learn for love
For life
That I never become weak
Through rough times
Love is kind and hope
Love does everything
Love has many words
So be patient
In life
We must be happy
When someone loves you so much
Someone loves you so much....

Margherita
Member Seraphic

since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

1 posted 2009-04-05 05:34 PM

quote:
Through rough times
Love is kind and hope
Love does everything
Love has many words
So be patient
In life

So true. Nicely done, dear Vandana.

Love,
Margherita

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

2 posted 2009-04-05 05:36 PM

vandana
That's so true, we must learn to be patient and realize the different values of love and how it affects us so many different ways.
Very nice composition, I enjoyed the read.

Eric

Kit McCallum

Administrator

Member Laureate

since 2000-04-30

Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada

3 posted 2009-04-06 06:06 AM

This is so very true, Vandana. Patience and the knowledge of someone loving you ... beautiful sentiments indeed! Much enjoyed.

Best wishes,
/Kit

suthern

Member Seraphic

since 1999-07-29

Posts 20723
Louisiana

4 posted 2009-04-06 09:34 AM

So very true... *S* Beautiful write! *S*

Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis

since 2000-06-21

Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song

5 posted 2009-04-06 11:55 AM

Wisdome filled excellence in your poetic words.

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Everyone wants to be free
When love sets our heats free
I yearn for love
I learn for love
For life
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So true are these words. Wonderful to read you.

Midnitesun

Member Empyrean

since 2001-05-18

Posts 28647
Gaia

6 posted 2009-04-06 07:25 PM

Beautifully written, Vandana, with a timeless loving message.

Artic Wind
Member Rara Avis

since 2007-09-16

Posts 8080
Realm of Supernatural

7 posted 2009-04-06 08:47 PM

True words you speak of in this beautifully put together poem! ~ Wonderful read

ARCTIC WIND

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