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Suncleaver
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0 posted 2009-04-05 11:14 AM



Painting by Louisa M Gallie


A finger traced across your velvet skin
Doth excite a low and sensuous sigh
From moist lips as red as blood, sweet as sin.

Our souls on wings of fire rise to the sky
As we unite the beating of one heart,
Though half concealed by flowing silk we lie.

Lust and passion born from the love of art,
Welcome me into the ocean of you
And pray that we may never be apart.

In the shiver of your sea we win through,
Union we will never bid adieu.

When I see your face all the angels are shamed.

© Copyright 2009 Luke Doubtfire - All Rights Reserved
Artic Wind
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1 posted 2009-04-05 11:16 AM


Enjoyed the Write! ~ ARH Will enjoy reading this!


ARCTIC WIND

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Forever In Your Heart
2 posted 2009-04-06 02:56 AM


Trace my face, these lips,
with wanting fingertips,
as these red ruby lips ...

kiss them one by one...

lay upon my chest,
as your worrys fly away,

with my love, your heart,
will never stray...

all this....
wrapped inside a lovers kiss...

~ARh

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3 posted 2009-04-09 08:57 PM


UGH! your too good... I envy you. =P
lol But please enlighten me on what's the difference in English and Italian poetry, besides the language?

-Zach

We all flirt with the tiniest notion of self-conclusion in one simple motion.  

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