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secondhanddreampoet
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0 posted 2009-04-03 06:44 PM


    passing mist

in the pale-soft light
   of morning,
though we may wish
    to query...
the passing mist
waits for no one.

     --- b. e. adams (4/3/2009)

© Copyright 2009 Bruce E. Adams Jr. - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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since 2000-05-14
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1 posted 2009-04-03 07:06 PM


Yes, it seems to be the time to query. A soft silent time of wonder.
You got it, the world moves on regardless.
Good work!

Eric

Artic Wind
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since 2007-09-16
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2 posted 2009-04-03 07:09 PM


Excellent!


ARCTIC WIND

Bill Charles
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3 posted 2009-04-03 07:29 PM


secondhanddreampoet - you have such great meanings in your words...

BC

Marchmadness
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4 posted 2009-04-04 03:38 AM


"the passing mist waits for no one" So very true, Bruce.
                          Ida

A Romantic Heart
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5 posted 2009-04-04 04:59 PM


I know what you mean dear poet,
here where I live, in the mornings,
you can drive and see a long stretch
of mountains, and on the tops of those
mountains, there is a mist, rolling over,
just like the sea billows of the sea,
it is kind of scary, but powerful, and
beautiful....



This is a photo I took from my phone one morning...

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