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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines 
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a smile. like the first sunshine after days of rain. a smile that beckons me closer, deeper into you. . . a tear. the very first drop after all the laughters, a tear thats clouding my eyes, hiding you. . . a song. stirring through the deafning silence, a song that's drowning silent cries, it's haunting you. ******* "omnia vincit amor" |
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Mysteria 
since 2001-03-07
Posts 18328British Columbia, Canada |
I loved your first stanza, what a wonderful way to think of the sun.  |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"a smile. like the first sunshine after days of rain." ~ Oh, yes! That kind of smile has the power to lift one's spirits high!  The entire poem, was special.  EA |
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i_am_patch! Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108manila, philippines |
thanks. "omnia vincit amor" |
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Pilgrimage Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945Texas, USA |
Oh, I like this very much. Nice progression, and overall a passionate write. Well done. Nan (Pilgrim variety) |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
this is lovely |
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