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greytree
Junior Member
since 2009-02-24
Posts 45
Wales

0 posted 2009-03-31 06:37 PM



My Happiest past
betrays me now.

Once, stolen glances through
a tapestry of innocent faces
my heart settled on you
an angel without such graces.

Our happiness passed
you betray me now

A dream turned reality
to care with caution
love you emphatically
feeling without distortion

Happily you part
to betray me now

I create my own downfall
passions soon turn awry
others you now enthrall
your heart turns to fly

My chances now all passed
I can't delay you now

If my heart could bleed
It would be a radient sunset
our day ending through your deed
now released from my enchantment.

In such an ugly time, beauty is the real protest

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Eloise
Senior Member
since 1999-11-27
Posts 1096
Wyoming
1 posted 2009-03-31 06:42 PM


This is so sad, but put the past behind.  They say the best is yet to come.  {{Hugs}}
Eloise

i_am_patch!
Member
since 2008-06-24
Posts 108
manila, philippines
2 posted 2009-04-09 08:29 PM


i agree...the poem is really sad..

"it is such a secret place--the land of tears.." (the little prince)

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