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Windhover
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0 posted 2009-03-29 09:01 AM







Touch me gently, as You slumber, whisper softly in the night;
hold me in the cradle of your dreams... our place of sweet delights.
Here, we can share the whispers of our hearts; this sweetest game, we play.
One day, we will not have to dream,
One day, my Love...
One day.

Together in our secret place, unfettered by reality;
making love upon some Golden shore, washed by some Silver sea,
Here, we can dance among the Cloud Cathedrals; fly so far away;
One day, together, we shall touch the Stars,
One day, my Love...
One day.

Here we can lie, soft dappled by the Sun, in secret, magic bowers.
A bed of yellow rose petals... and You;
exquisite, breathless hours
of Love...
your skin, soft to my touch; your hair, in tumbled, sweet array;
One day our fingertips will gently touch,
One day, my Love...
One day.

One day, as you awaken in my arms, soft drifting from your sleep
into our sweet reality; the morning rendezvous we keep
together... you and I;
our dreams... just memories, so far away;
Then, we, at last, will live The Dream,
One day, my Love...
One day.


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Earth Angel
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1 posted 2009-03-29 09:05 AM


May yours and her day, soon come!

Oh, the yearning and longing is downright palpable! Another fine penning about love and loving.


Linda

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2 posted 2009-03-29 07:09 PM


excellent Romanticism!

much applause!!

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3 posted 2009-03-29 08:46 PM


I love the flow, and the placement is so pleasing to the reader's eye as it cascades down the page.  Another lovely submission.

Carpe' Diem,
Mysteria

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4 posted 2009-03-29 09:22 PM


love the picture

love the sentiments here very much!

JamesMichael
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5 posted 2009-03-29 09:52 PM


I can relate...perfection...James
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6 posted 2009-03-31 10:30 AM


A bed of yellow rose petals... and You;

May your one day come soon! *S* Beautiful write! *S*

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