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Two Rivers
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Two Rivers |
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Huan Yi Member Ascendant
since 2004-10-12
Posts 6688Waukegan 
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. The sun rose Over a blue sea A strong young man His first love still asleep Under a summer sky You didn’t Give your name At the front desk Wanting it to be A surprise Yet I have known For decades that you again Would reappear one day And this moment would be An embarrassment for The both of us After all We have very Different memories And perspectives on Our past What happiness I’ve known and I’ve known much with her Had your not being here At its core The office lights Shine on beautiful Portraits looking on A ship’s bell clock With subtle hints Ticking the hour . |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
"We have very Different memories And perspectives on Our past" Seems to be the case, we each have personally selective memory banks. |
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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! |
I particularly love the beginning of this 'write'! serious applause!! |
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suthern
since 1999-07-29
Posts 20723Louisiana |
And this moment would be An embarrassment for The both of us After all We have very Different memories And perspectives on Our past Too often we don't realize that truth... until we're standing in that embarrassment. Beautiful write! |
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