Open Poetry #44 |
Across Oceans Riven |
Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Painting by Teresa Carter Be still my gentle lover's heart, Each beat you have given, Though we may be so far apart Across oceans riven. Your words, softly they call to me And draw me close to you, I feel your breath across the sea Borne by the love of you. Your touch brushing a soft caress Across my brow in sleep, Each kiss of luscious lips you press I shall forever keep. My words, they now give flight to love To fly the cold water, So they mayhap reach from above Beauty's truest daughter. God above, grant us wings of fire To ride the wind in flame, I burn like the sun, in desire And hear you call my name. A chorus of agony from heaven and rain poured in a colossus of angel's tears. |
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Falling rain
since 2008-01-31
Posts 2178Small town, Illinois |
Love this Luke!!! You always dazzle me with the words you write! -Zach |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
"I burn like the sun, in desire And hear you call my name." that is so excellent |
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Artic Wind Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 8080Realm of Supernatural |
Enjoyed the Write ARCTIC WIND |
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A Romantic Heart Member Ascendant
since 1999-09-03
Posts 5496Forever In Your Heart |
Luke....Luke.....(whispers upon the wind) You astound me, soul touching words, a very excellent piece of art to enhance the beauty of your words even more, bringing them to life... ~Warm Hugs ~ARH |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thank you all for reading and enjoying this guys. I knew you'd reply Millette... |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
"Luke, Luke..." The wind is calling your name. You are such a fine writer of romance. Each poem is a piece of finely-crafted art from your heart. Linda |
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Suncleaver Member
since 2009-01-18
Posts 481Stafford England |
Thanks Linda. Such high praise from a master wordweaver such as yourself means a lot to me. A chorus of agony from heaven and rain poured in a colossus of angel's tears. |
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