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secondhanddreampoet Member Ascendant
since 2006-11-07
Posts 6394a 'Universalist' ! 
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Other Springs traceless clouds in a delicate sky encase these ancient hills… vanishing deep-time echoes of other springs ...b. e. adams (3/25/2009) |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
I just love the way you take words, and make a beautiful picture!  |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Yes, that's the way it works exactly. Well written in just a few words. Eric |
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Marchmadness Member Rara Avis
since 2007-09-16
Posts 9271So. El Monte, California |
A lovely haunting write, Bruce, A keeper. Ida |
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2islander2 Member Ascendant
since 2008-03-12
Posts 6825by the sea |
I like the kind of eternity installed in your poem. It seems like springs are eternal and successful. have a nice day yann |
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