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Fizzle
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since 2009-03-21
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0 posted 2009-03-25 07:14 PM


See, the director is at hand!
The music's about to start!
The music's placed on stand
while player's mind the art

And so the piece begins!
Beauty caresses the ears
The world seems to sing,
a song that stretches years

O, Hear the violins play
and hear the cellos mourn!
They steal my mind away
away from all that's torn!

O, hear the harp sing!
and listen, the flutes cry
It's as if pain's never been,
As if light never dies

But oh, the curtain falls
and the violin's song stops
The crowd stands tall, applauds
but still the music's sought

Ah, it can't be helped!;
when the song is no more
the world's weight is felt
and heavy grows the soul.


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1 posted 2009-03-25 07:27 PM


very nice! I think music makes things better...depending, it can turn a bad day around
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2 posted 2009-03-25 10:26 PM


Luckily there's always a new composer on the horizon just as there's always another poet with a fresh point of view.
                                  Ida

[This message has been edited by Marchmadness (03-27-2009 02:27 AM).]

LindsayP
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3 posted 2009-03-26 08:31 PM



Yes Fizzle music to me is one of the

pleasures of life. you wrote it well.
cheers.

Lindsay

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4 posted 2009-03-29 01:21 AM


I heard the song of your words.

A

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